Example 1
In one compo where a boy wrote about pushing a girl into a pond and was punished by his mom who imposed a no-computer weekend, he ended off with this '...."Well, at least, I have my little bit of fun today" I mumbled to myself.'
Thoughts: I laughed and thought it was witty, but then I also told him that he should write that he felt sorry.
Example 2
In another compo piece it was about helping a girl who was lost and was rewarded with $10 by the girl's mother. A boy wrote as the concluding sentence: "I hope there will be more lost children the next time I come here again," I smiled to myself as I pocketed the money.
Thoughts: How? What do you think? Witty, right?
Who would want more children to be lost!?But still its a bit funny but very witty.Mr Andy other people in our class never had any comments except me,I had 3 comments sent to you haha.
ReplyDeleteMr Andy We need to do Compo ??
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